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The Key

There is a boy that holds the key to her heart.

Sometimes, he brandishes that key and smirks at the rest of the boys. Chuckling to himself, he taunts, "Lookie here, mates! I have the key!" (as if any other boy would care, but he thinks they do.)

Sometimes, he puts that key in his back pocket - just for safe keeping.

Sometimes he wears it around his neck - to keep it close to his heart.

Sometimes, he lays it down on a counter or puts it high on a shelf or puts it deep inside his wardrobe, because he doesn't want to lose it. Then, proceeds to forget where he hid it.

Then, there are times he stands on a cliff overlooking the sea, and tosses that key into the waves crashing against the rocky shore below.

He swears that he'll never use that key again, because it reminds him that he's not worthy of the treasure chest it unlocks.

He turns, and walks away. But as he hears the sound of the metal clinking against the rocks right before the waves sweep it into itself, pulled deep into the dark mysteries of the sea - he hesitates.

Then - swan dives, careless, reckless, hopeful, and longing. Wave after wave, he will never stop searching for that key, because it doesn't belong to the sea.

It belongs to him. Forever.

Image by Austin Neill

Comments · 8

  • @ricardo993(68)· 1421d

    A short but symbolic story. I also wish you find that key, because it's better to have it than not to have it..

  • @itsostylish(71)· 1421d

    So brilliant and enchanting. Exquisite emotion rocking the soul, the waves washing away the treasure. I can see him searching in the dead of night for that key, God help him! Really beautiful, you’ve packed so much into such a small space. Beautiful read! ❤️💕❤️🥰🥰🥰🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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  • @jayna(75)· 1422d

    Oh my. This is so beautiful and poignant, @stormcharmer. I can see that swan dive! I cringed, fretting about those rocks! How many times in my life have I thrown away something precious — just wanting it away from me, where it no longer has power — only to realize that I had to get it back?

    We've missed you! So great to see you in The Ink Well again.

  • @stellageorge(65)· 1422d

    Your story is short yet captivating. I wonder if he got the key from the sea because if he didn't it means he lost his chance with her.

  • @samsmith1971(70)· 1422d

    I really enjoyed this cameo piece, Stormcharmer. I hope the boy finds that key and that when he does, he keeps it close to his heart for the rest of his life. He no doubt has realised that it was entrusted to him for a reason; because the priceless contents of the treasure chest are precious; a heart that requires his constant love and attention. A real key thrown in the ocean and left to its own devices will rust over time, making connection inside the lock more abrasive and difficult to negotiate, when attempts are made to re-gain access to the treasure. Godspeed young boy - let nothing stand in your way! !LUV !ALIVE

  • @theinkwell(74)· 1422d

    A beautiful and interesting peetic text, @stormcharmer , which can perhaps be read in the key of a short story. Thanks for posting in The Ink Well. We are looking for great stories to curate, with excellent characters, action, dialog and narrative. In our guidelines (see our manifesto), we suggest a bare minimum of 350 words, in order to develop a strong story. You'll find great tips for developing characters, conflict, story arcs and more in our catalog of fiction writing tips. Good luck and keep writing.