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Reply by @kemmyb

Well, a playful little lesson in kindness! It's about time the twins realised that the world doesn't revolve around them and that other children have feelings too. The bathroom scene had me chuckling. So the troublemakers can get scared too? A harmless little scare was all it took to make them rethink their mischievous behaviour.

I enjoyed this short piece. The secret smiles from the nuns at the end were the perfect finishing touch. Beautifully written as always. Do take and have a relaxing weekend. 🌹

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  • Hello @kemmyb. Yes, a playful lesson, sanctioned by the most High the nuns concluded. I can say it certainly did change the attitude of those two mischievous twins. They got a double dose of cure for both their assault on a fellow student. Children can be so harsh sometimes that they don't realize how hurtful bullying can be. Even traumatizing for some because they don't understand the other person's mental capacity to absorb jokes and pranks.

    I'm pleased you enjoyed this story. I wanted the quiet place of service to come alive with its residents. I chose the bathroom as the starting point because it would seem so unexpected. I was hoping it did.

    Thanks so much for your visit and engagement with my story. Take care.

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