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The Ink Well

ETERNAL LOSER | FICTION | (EN-ES)

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Sometimes you can get lucky and hope that luck stays on your side for several days, but most of the time you’re burdened with constant misfortune that keeps you on the brink of misery... For several days, rain had poured down over the city’s impoverished streets, a constant reminder that water tends to fall on already-wet ground.

But despite the bad weather, there was a young man who fantasized about a sunny day. His name was Hank, an optimistic fellow with his eyes set on financial success. His gaze was fixed on the television in his apartment, as the lottery program was about to announce the winning ticket.

“And the result is... 6-5-2-1-4-3.”

Hank looked at the ticket he had bought that very morning. It read...

“6-5-2-1-4-4...”

If it weren’t for one number, he would be a millionaire right now. Seeing his failure, he collapsed onto the floor, utterly exhausted.

Far behind him lay a humble home and a family he had sworn, as a young man full of pride and dreams, he would never return to until he became a wealthy millionaire.

The next day, he went to the same convenience store where he usually bought his daily ticket.

“Good morning, Mr. Donario,” Hank greeted him with a smile, despite his pockets being as empty as his stomach.

The old shopkeeper sighed and shook his head as he placed the usual ticket on the counter.

“Hank, son, how many times have I told you that this is just throwing money away? The odds are always against you,” the worried old man scolded him.

Hank dropped a few coins onto the counter, paying for the last bill he had left in his wallet. He had nothing but a penny remaining.

“Statistics don’t know my determination,” Hank commented as he took the lottery ticket with unwavering confidence.

People around him constantly told him that success was a matter of mathematics, but he blindly believed that success was the reward for a battle of endurance. And he had no intention of giving up.

Hank left the store and searched his pocket for the last coin he had left, his only ally in his quest for wealth. It was the same coin he had kept since the day he began believing in the lottery. He used it to scratch the ticket, which, at best, would be a one-way ticket back home.

All around him, life rushed along the street. Neighbors burdened by debt, workers running after buses. None of them paid any attention to Hank and his obsession with scratching his golden ticket.

Hank was just a fool clinging to hope, a man who had spent his savings on the good fortune one could sometimes have. Since childhood, he had always believed in what he saw on television, and when he watched an interview with a man who had won a million dollars in the lottery, he dreamed day and night of having the same luck.

But his expectations never became reality, always because he had the wrong ticket: a five instead of an eight, a zero instead of a seven. The daily loss was as certain as another sunrise.

“Again... better luck next time,” he murmured, putting the ticket in his jacket beside a stack of hundreds of identical slips that filled his pockets.

That night, in his tiny, dark apartment, the only light came from the television. The floor was covered with newspaper clippings about lottery winners. As the program began, his phone rang. It was his mother.

Hank hesitated for a second before answering:

“Son, how are you? Your father is asking about you. You don’t have to prove anything to anyone. Please come home,” her voice on the other end sounded fragile.

Hank gripped the phone so tightly he nearly damaged it. The pride and pain caused by that reckless promise he had made in his youth gnawed at his chest. He turned his gaze toward the pile of losing tickets scattered across the floor.

He was tired, hungry, and financially ruined. But giving up meant accepting defeat, admitting that he was a loser—a failure who had been too foolish to see the truth.

“Mom, I’m fine. I’m working hard on my big plan. We’ll see each other soon, but only when I’ve kept my word. I’m not coming back empty-handed,” Hank replied, trying to make his voice sound firm and confident.

“Son, money isn’t everything...” she began to say before the line abruptly went dead because Hank ended the call.

The next day, the cycle repeated itself. And the day after that. And the day after that. Entire weeks passed, during which the only food he could count on was the blind optimism that drove him to get up one more time.

Hank had become an urban legend of excessive perseverance, known as the man willing to lose everything for the remote possibility of winning it all.

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Original version in Spanish

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A veces se puede tener suerte y desear que se quede de nuestro lado por varios días, pero la mayoría del tiempo se carga con un constante infortunio que nos tiene al borde de la miseria...Durante varios días han sido dias lluviosos en las calles empobrecidas de la ciudad, un recordatorio constante de que el agua tiende a caer sobre tierra mojada.

Pero a pesar del mal tiempo, había un joven adulto que fantaseaba con un día soleado, ese era Hank, un tipo optimista con la mirada puesta en el éxito financiero; sus ojos estaban fijos en el televisor de su departamento, ya que el programa de la lotería estaba a punto de anunciar al boleto ganador.

"Y el resultado es... 6-5-2-1-4-3"

Hank miro en sus manos el boleto que había comprado esa misma mañana y decía...

"6-5-2-1-4-4..."

De no ser por un número, ahora mismo se consagraría como millonario. Al ver su fracaso, se desplomo en el suelo muy agotado.

En el pasado, a sus espaldas quedaba muy atrás una casa humilde y una familia a la que le juró, siendo apenas un muchacho lleno de orgullo e ilusiones, que no volvería jamás a cruzar su puerta hasta convertirse en un acaudalado millonario.

Al día siguiente, fue a la misma tienda de conveniencia en el que suele comprar su boleto diario.

"Buenos días señor Donario" saludó Hank con una sonrisa a pesar de que sus bolsillos estuvieran tan vacíos como su estómago.

El viejo tendero suspiró, sacudiendo la cabeza mientras extendía el boleto habitual sobre el mostrador.

"Hank, hijo, mira que te he dicho mil veces que esto es tirar el dinero. Las estadísticas siempre juegan en contra." le reprochó el anciano preocupado.

Hank dejó caer unas monedas sobre el mostrador, pagando el último billete que le quedaba en la cartera. No le quedaba nada más que un centavo.

"La estadística no conoce mi determinación" le comento Hank mientras agarraba el boleto de lotería con una seguridad inquebrantable.

La gente a su alrededor le decía constantemente que el éxito es cuestión de matemáticas, pero él creía ciegamente en que el éxito es el premio de una lucha de resistencia. Y no pensaba rendirse.

Hank salió a la tienda y buscó en su bolsillo la última moneda que le quedaba, su único aliado en su búsqueda de riquezas. Era la misma moneda que llevaba conservando desde el día en que empezó a creer en la lotería, la uso para raspar el boleto que en el mejor de los casos sería un boleto de ida a su hogar.

A su alrededor, la vida transcurría con prisa por toda la calle. Vecinos agobiados por las deudas, trabajadores corriendo tras el autobús. Ninguno de ellos le prestaba atención a Hank y su obsesión al raspar su boleto dorado.

Hank era solo un necio aferrado a la esperanza, un hombre que gastó sus ahorros en la buena fortuna que se puede tener a veces. Porque desde niño siempre creyó en lo que veía en la televisión, y cuando vio la entrevista de un hombre que ganó un millón de dólares en la lotería, soño día y noche con correr con la misma suerte.

Pero sus expectativas no se hacian realidad, todo por tener el boleto equivocado siempre; un cinco en lugar de un ocho, un cero en lugar de un siete. La pérdida diaria era una constante tan certera como otro amanecer.

"Otra vez... mejor suerte para la próxima" murmuró guardando el boleto en su chaqueta junto a una pila de cientos de papeles idénticos que llenaban sus bolsillos.

Esa noche, en su diminuto departamento a oscuras, la única luz provenía del televisor. El piso estaba cubierto de recortes de periódicos con historias de ganadores de la lotería. Mientras el programa empezaba, su teléfono sonó, Era su madre.

Hank dudó un segundo antes de contestar:

"Hijo, ¿cómo estás? Tu padre pregunta por ti. No tienes que demostrarle nada a nadie. Por favor Regresa a casa." la voz al otro lado sonaba frágil.

Hank apretó el teléfono con tanta fuerza que por poco lo estropea. El orgullo y el dolor que trajo esa imprudente promesa hecha en su juventud le carcomía el interior de su pecho. Volteo la mirada hacia la pila de boletos perdedores que que estaban regados por el piso.

Estaba cansado, hambriento y financieramente en la ruina. Pero rendirse significaba aceptar la derrota, admitir que era un perdedor, un fracasado muy incrédulo.

"Mamá, estoy bien. Estoy trabajando duro en mi gran plan. Pronto nos veremos, pero será cuando cumpla mi palabra. No pienso volver con las manos vacías." respondió Hank intentando que su voz sonara firme y confiada.

"Hijo, el dinero no lo es todo..." comenzó a decir ella antes de que la línea se cortara abruptamente porque Hank finalizó la llamada.

Al día siguiente, el ciclo se repitió. Y el siguiente. Y el siguiente. Semanas enteras donde el único alimento seguro era el optimismo ciego que lo empujaba a levantarse una vez más.

Hank se había convertido en una leyenda urbana de la perseverancia desmedida, era conocido como el hombre dispuesto a perderlo todo por la remota posibilidad de ganarlo todo.

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Comments · 4

  • @zoe01(73)· 6h

    You've been curated 🌷 through Ecency

  • @iyimoga(67)· 10h

    Reality hits hard, the more you don't consider what I'd real the more reality move far from you. Hoping for things such as this can be harmful to one's finances.

  • @theinkwell(74)· 11h
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  • @theinkwell(74)· 11h

    Hello @neotopher,

    You are a wonderful writer and we always enjoy reading your publications. However, your stories (in the original Spanish) have been coming back with a high degree of AI content (according to our professional checkers). Please be careful about the editing tools you are using. There is no AI editing allowed. We only permit correction of grammar errors, but never stylistic modifications.

    We will curate today, but please be careful in the future.

    Thank you.