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Stones in the Shoe, a freewrite

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How I long to write a poem! I've joined a poetry reading/writing group. We only meet once a month. You'd think one month would be plenty of time to write a little poem, but, alas, it is also food-preserving month in the northeast USA, and my time is very limited for such things as galavanting through my imagination and churning out poems.

I know what the poem I long to write would be, though. It would be along the lines of a few other very short poems I have already written, which I will add to this post after the eggtimer goes off. Amusing, I hope. Telling, too. All about the nuts and bolts, the nitty gritty, the little unbearables, of a marriage.

It would start something like, or at least contain.

I thought of you and then I noticed the stone in my shoe

Something like that.

It would be of medium length.

It would have increasingly annoying stanzas

until

at the very end

that stone in the shoe becomes unbearable

and out goes the shoe.

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This is my entry to @mariannewest's daily freewrite challenge. Today's prompt is write a poem.

Here are two of the poems I have already written on this subject:

If I could, I would take away your pain and ball it up like snow until it hardened into ice and then I... would throw it at you, dear, and shut you up.

What would I give to end your pain?

A bullet!


The last time I saw you was like being in a beautiful garden and stepping on a hidden wrong side up hoe


image by @wales, Dean Moriarty

Comments · 4

  • @carolkean(69)· 19d

    Oh how I love these!!! Stone in shoe. Reminds me of you. It's complete. It's awesome. Garden hoe. One innocent step. WHAM. Take the complainer's pain, ball it up, throw it back - don't we all wanna do that!!!

    You are the master at saying in a few words the things that we struggle to endure.

    Do you have any poems to eulogize your dear little beagle or your beloved cats?

    Bobi the Bad (also the Beatific, some days) went down on Sunday. I'm not ready yet to write about it. Age 16. Renal failure. Stopped eating. Four vet visits, various meds, expensive and ineffective. When our pets age, the extreme measures to prolong their days is NOT IN THEIR BEST INTEREST.

    More on that another day...

  • @futuremind(73)· 35d

    Hello @owasco!

    I hope you have been doing well my friend.

    I love that wrong side up poem.

  • That last poem cracked me up! I've been married for 43 years, and there are days like that.

  • @soarshine(55)· 39d

    Ooops that's cool